Nice Martin, I think you may provoke more emotion from the audience if she is younger and cuter though... your Goldie is cute, but maybe too sexualized. Just my two cents, if she fits with your vision of the story KEEP HER the way she is! Good luck~Kharo72
I like the victorian era costume design. Also the Algebraic formula for the title of the story is a cute motiffe.
Nice Martin, I think you may provoke more emotion from the audience if she is younger and cuter though... your Goldie is cute, but maybe too sexualized. Just my two cents, if she fits with your vision of the story KEEP HER the way she is! Good luck
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I like the victorian era costume design. Also the Algebraic formula for the title of the story is a cute motiffe.
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